You're a bomb writer, my friend. Your beta must rock. (Because we all know the secret to bomb writers is bomb editors.) I really like this, so far, and admittedly you piqued my interest with the "this story is sick" comments. :D? Especially loved the ending, can't say I saw cocaine coming. I'm looking forward to what comes after this.
I feel so dirty reading this..... good job! This is a great start, did not see the coke coming. Looking forward to the next update.
That was great! Not horrible at all. It was surprising towards the end. The whole time I was thinking: How could she be depressed with a new baby and the best husband ever? I started to think it was postpartum depression, but the drugs explain it.
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