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• tears fall for a reason

  (#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-04-18

  wow really good opening chapter. i'm intrigued. please continue, but you might want to work on spacing out your duologue (constructive criticism) update soon.

  Author's response

  thanks for the advice and i am glad you liked it coz i didnt think it was very good but i will post the next chaptet soon =]

• tears fall for a reason

  (#) BlueFlare12 2011-04-18

  I cant wait to read more, it is very good and a great cliff hanger ending :) Update soon :)

  Author's response

  im going to update tomorow and i am glad you liked it .

• tears fall for a reason

  (#) ChloesGreenDay 2011-05-01

  S'alright, but the whole "Going To School, being a social outcast" thing is the most over-used plotline EVER. Spelling's a bit ropey, plus you seem to be scared of full stops because there were only about 4 or 5 in that whole first chapter. Still, i've seen worse. I hope you take this somewhere interesting.

• tears fall for a reason

  (#) NotKissingYouGoodBye 2012-10-04

  I read three lines and I was inspired. After i finish my current Fic. I might write another one inspired by this line
  
  'I cant go back to sleep as the nightmare that keeps me awake every night still lurkes in my bed, just waiting for me to close my eyes again so that it can torture me with painful memories and flashbacks.'
  
  
  X3 i love it. I so can't wait for more so i'm going to read the other chapters.
  
  XDXDXDXD
  

  Author's response

  aawh.. thats so cool.. im glad you liked the story :]

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