Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > tears fall for a reason

chapter 3

by rockerchick4life 2 Reviews

frank rings mikey in tears .....

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2011/04/19 - Updated: 2011/04/19 - 311 words

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  • tears fall for a reason

    (#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-04-19 10:25:08 AM

    you should put some actual dialog in this. that would make it so much better :)

    Author's response

    thanks and i will put more diaolgue in it .
  • tears fall for a reason

    (#) ChloesGreenDay 2011-05-01 10:46:39 AM

    Okay, so we're finally seeing a few full stops here, but there are still to many errors to name. It's alright to make two or three, but there's loads in this. Don't think i'm being nasty, i'm just trying to help.

    Author's response

    its ok thank you

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