frank rings mikey in tears .....
(#) ChloesGreenDay 2011-05-01 10:46:39 AMOkay, so we're finally seeing a few full stops here, but there are still to many errors to name. It's alright to make two or three, but there's loads in this. Don't think i'm being nasty, i'm just trying to help.
Author's responseits ok thank you