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Oh So Scared

by jodiethejodster 9 Reviews

arriving at franks house and...a lighter...burning flesh..a..a..gun?!

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [!!] [V] [?] - Published: 2011/04/20 - Updated: 2011/04/20 - 1098 words - Complete

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  • My Mistake? Being Me.

    (#) Kahuna-Sama 2011-04-20 12:08:38 PM

    How could you do this is me! I'm having a panic attack now! Nothing bad going to happen to Frank or I'll cyper-strangle you! :@ I joke, I joke. Great job. Interesting twist with Poppa Iero. murdering Momma Iero, 'cause she secretly loved her precious boy! God I want to strangle a fictional character!

    I'm looking forward to next chapter! and btw this isn't a failure, it amazing! Be proud of yourself young padawan! ;)x

    xoxo
    Kat

    Author's response

    Aww Thankies Kat :D xx
    I thought the story needed a twist soo.....mommma iero wuved frankie!!! :D and i really hate poppa iero too...i based him off of my dad in homophobia-ness and my uncle in brutal ness. meh, messed up family ;)
    i won't keep you waiting to long....how does a few days sound? as tomoz i'm going to a killjoy meet up so i'm busy :S thanks for reviewing xxxxx
    jodie ;)
  • My Mistake? Being Me.

    (#) emocutter91 2011-04-20 01:50:54 PM

    I totally loved this chapter! Poor Frankie! I've never been shot with a gun, but, not gonna lie, I cried coz of Frankie and then the similarities of the torture and abuse of myself... But, hey, ya know just the fact that you write about this happening to other people makes me feel like I'm not alone? While I'm no longer in my previous situation, the scars are still there. (and it wasn't my parents) you definitely don't fail... You totally succeed! Xoxo

    Author's response

    Thanks For Reviewing :)
    The Scars Will Fade, I Promise.
    I've Had Times I've Felt Like 'that' And Even Did Stuff (i blamed my dog) But I'm Over That Now And I Write Fan Fic To Help Cope Y'know :)
    I'm Glad You Liked It And I'll Update Soon
    Jodie xoxoxo
  • My Mistake? Being Me.

    (#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-04-20 02:23:48 PM

    YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON I'M DYING OVER HERE!!!! this is amazing i only started reading today and i'm hooked :D

    please let Frankie live

    Author's response

    Yay!!!!!!!! I Has Another Reader!!! :D And I Will Update Soon, Infact..I'll Start Drafting Naow :) (i never draft >.< at least i can get some idea of my story then ;) )
  • My Mistake? Being Me.

    (#) kageshi 2011-04-20 02:37:46 PM

    You've got to continue this story! It is not a failure and it never will be if you continue to write and have fun with it. You are good at giving a character a personality and having them stick to it. Please update soon!
    Love,
    KageShi :+

    Author's response

    I will :D xx And Thanks For Reading :'3 It Makes Me Happy ^^ :D
    Jodie xoxo
  • My Mistake? Being Me.

    (#) fueledbyPanic 2011-04-20 08:15:26 PM

    I don't know if I've posted any reviews on this story but this is NOT a fail!!!!! It's actually pretty exciting and this chapter really scared me... I would like to say that Frankie's dad needs to go die in a hole or something cause he really pisses me off. But anyways keep writing!
  • My Mistake? Being Me.

    (#) Mcrfan789 2011-04-20 08:43:29 PM

    Noooooooooo! Cliffhanger! I hope Frankie makes it. Gee has to save him! Anyways, I really like this story. Keep updating. ^.^
  • My Mistake? Being Me.

    (#) Roc5ky 2011-04-20 10:26:56 PM

    I'm gonna cry, you CAN'T kill Frankie...please!
  • My Mistake? Being Me.

    (#) annabel-lee 2011-04-20 11:43:16 PM

    Oh Frankie! Live Frankie, live! That was a surprise, the mom loving him. It showed how sick in the head the dad was. Oh god, that lighter thing was gruesome. I was like "NO!!!! NOT FRANKIE!!!". PLEASE update soon!
  • My Mistake? Being Me.

    (#) Keep-it-Ugly 2011-04-22 12:02:52 PM

    OMG! UPDATE ASAP!!! PLEASE!

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