arriving at franks house and...a lighter...burning flesh..a..a..gun?!
(#) Kahuna-Sama 2011-04-20 12:08:38 PMHow could you do this is me! I'm having a panic attack now! Nothing bad going to happen to Frank or I'll cyper-strangle you! :@ I joke, I joke. Great job. Interesting twist with Poppa Iero. murdering Momma Iero, 'cause she secretly loved her precious boy! God I want to strangle a fictional character!
I'm looking forward to next chapter! and btw this isn't a failure, it amazing! Be proud of yourself young padawan! ;)x
Author's responseAww Thankies Kat :D xx
I thought the story needed a twist soo.....mommma iero wuved frankie!!! :D and i really hate poppa iero too...i based him off of my dad in homophobia-ness and my uncle in brutal ness. meh, messed up family ;)
i won't keep you waiting to long....how does a few days sound? as tomoz i'm going to a killjoy meet up so i'm busy :S thanks for reviewing xxxxx
(#) emocutter91 2011-04-20 01:50:54 PMI totally loved this chapter! Poor Frankie! I've never been shot with a gun, but, not gonna lie, I cried coz of Frankie and then the similarities of the torture and abuse of myself... But, hey, ya know just the fact that you write about this happening to other people makes me feel like I'm not alone? While I'm no longer in my previous situation, the scars are still there. (and it wasn't my parents) you definitely don't fail... You totally succeed! Xoxo
Author's responseThanks For Reviewing :)
The Scars Will Fade, I Promise.
I've Had Times I've Felt Like 'that' And Even Did Stuff (i blamed my dog) But I'm Over That Now And I Write Fan Fic To Help Cope Y'know :)
I'm Glad You Liked It And I'll Update Soon
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-04-20 02:23:48 PMYOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON I'M DYING OVER HERE!!!! this is amazing i only started reading today and i'm hooked :D
please let Frankie live
Author's responseYay!!!!!!!! I Has Another Reader!!! :D And I Will Update Soon, Infact..I'll Start Drafting Naow :) (i never draft >.< at least i can get some idea of my story then ;) )
- You've got to continue this story! It is not a failure and it never will be if you continue to write and have fun with it. You are good at giving a character a personality and having them stick to it. Please update soon!
Author's responseI will :D xx And Thanks For Reading :'3 It Makes Me Happy ^^ :D
(#) fueledbyPanic 2011-04-20 08:15:26 PMI don't know if I've posted any reviews on this story but this is NOT a fail!!!!! It's actually pretty exciting and this chapter really scared me... I would like to say that Frankie's dad needs to go die in a hole or something cause he really pisses me off. But anyways keep writing!