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Getting slapped in the balls

My opening chapter

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama,Humor - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [V] [X] - Published: 2011/04/20 - Updated: 2011/04/20 - 2902 words

Reviews

• Our Dangerous Days

  (#) StopThePress 2011-04-25 06:02:59 PM

  I love the way this starts, by the way! I really like where this story's going. The only thing I would advise you to do is practice separating quotes with the enter key. Every time a character speaks, unless the same character is still speaking, hit the 'Enter' key. (: Other than that, I really like this story!

  Author's response

  Thank you, I will remember to do that on my next chapter. I haven't written Fanfics in a long time I love reading them but I have to have a good idea if I am going to write one.

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