First chapter: This is the hard copy, so it's different to the one before. :)
(#) JCproductions 2010-11-30 11:01:54 PMOMG LYKE THIS IS SOO HOT! CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT WAYCESTYNESS! WHERE ARE MY COOKIES I REVIEWD DIDDN'T I??? LOVE YOU LOTS
Author's responseOMG LYKE THANK YOU SO MUCH! I WORKED REALLY HARD ON IT SORRY ITS SO SHORT BUT THE NEXT ONE WILL BE BETTER I PROMISE
COOKIES! I GIVE YOU LOTS OF COOKIES! THANK YOU SO MUCH
LOVE YOU LOTS TOO!
THERES GONNA BE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCCCCCCCHHHHHHHH WAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYCCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
(#) MCR-overload 2011-04-16 05:39:21 AMOMG THIS IS COMPLETE RUBBISH! YOU NEED TO WORK ON YOUR SPELLING AND GRAMMER!!
You put a lot of hard work into THAT?!!
Author's responseCan you give me three examples of spelling and grammar mistakes?
Also, I will take your review critisising my spelling and grammar when you can actually spell 'grammar'. Try sounding it out in your head.
(#) PatrickIsTheSex 2011-04-20 09:53:30 PMO_O I Gotta Agree With MCR-overload This isn't good...at ALL. If you wanna go hate on my story now, GO AHEAD! I'll be waiting :)
Author's responseNo, I'm not going to childishly "hate" on your stories, but I am going to ask you why, exactly, my story is so bad. If, like MCR-Overload, you don't respond, I will dismiss your "helpful review" as irrelevant.
(#) perfectzombie 2011-04-22 11:56:59 AMThis story isn't bad, like the others stated but... It might need a little bit of work(: it's better than anything i could do, but it still might need a bit of work if you know what i mean? O.O
Author's responseYeah, I do know what you mean, and thank you for not flaming :) I understand it needs work, and that's why I've rewritten it :) (And added another chapter, check it out if you want). Thank you for not hating and leaving a decent review. :)
(#) PatrickIsTheSex 2011-04-22 06:49:42 PMUm hi. I'm really sorry about my review. I was really upset and I didn't mean to write a review like that. I've reread it and I think it is actually good. So yeah, I'm really sorry about that. It wasn't really the right time for me to be reviewing this anyway because I was upset and I'm kinda mean when I'm upset and I hate on other peoples storys so yeah...I'm truly sorry. But seriously now I've reread this I think it's actually good (: