Skeleton pajamas, irritating siblings and rainstorms...
(#) Paranoia_Destroya 2011-04-24 12:19:31 PM*“Straigtners! I need straightners!” I dash across my room, yanking open the drawer in my desk where they’re kept.
“I don’t think they’ll work on your sexuality, Gee.”*
Ahh don't we all love Mikey :)
This story is awesome by the way. Please don't give up on this, I love the way you describe everything perfectly and I can see everything clearly in my mind. This story is amazing :)
(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-04-24 12:23:04 PMI went from 'awh, homework and school and it's a Sunday' to 'YAY AN UPDATE MUST READ NOW!' Seriously, thank God you updated this. I forgot you were banned though, I guess that what happens when other fictions sporattically update.
The chapter was good, even if you are still sad. True, the ending made me sad, since Frank ran off, into the rain, away from Gerard, but other than that it's awesome that the picture was fixed with the black stitching. The Gee kiss, I get. But the Frank run is the only thing I don't get about the chapter. I mean, did Frank realize he was enjoying it, or was he afraid of what was going to happen Monday? He shouldn't be afraid if it's option two! He's Frank, for fuck's sake! Frank can kick any guy in the balls before they bend over to his height lol.
And the beginning of the chapter was hilarious! Gerard panicking over the ten minute visit with Frank in the park... Worrying about makeup, clothes, hair, appearance... Mikey shoulda slapped him upside the head, told him to calm the fuck down, and given him some clothes, rushing out of the door. Nothing to fret or lose your popcorn over. Jesus, too big of a fretter...
And I think I have a tree frog in my house.
Update as soon as you can!
(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-04-24 12:44:29 PMOMG
“Straigtners! I need straightners!” I dash across my room, yanking open the drawer in my desk where they’re kept.
“I don’t think they’ll work on your sexuality, Gee.”
this bit made me giggle so much XD i loved it
this was soo great exactly what we have been waiting for awww so sweet ........apart from the end :( haha but i know you will wright just perfectly in the next chapter. I think they are so cute together and again i love how you portray them its great :)
damn i really wanted to be the first to review to :( but i had to look after my bro ahh well this as great gonna rate now :)
keep up the awesomness
(#) perfectzombie 2011-04-24 01:04:40 PMOMG i've been waiting for AGES for this, it was truly... KJHGLKAGA it was fucking amazing! The ending made me sad though.. (it was still bloody amazing) poor frank i bet he's really confused! Poor Gee omg AHH! PLEASE update soon im actually DYING here! D:
(#) MyBloodyTearsFall 2011-04-24 04:02:37 PMOh My God! It was so amazing! I love your use of imagery. and how Gerard panics about seeing Frank! awwww I was so sad when Frank ran away! Keep updating! this story is just getting better and better. the suspense is killing me!