(#) CosmicZombie 2011-04-25 11:37:26 AMoh my god, i'm so so sorry i haven't reviewed this sooner- i've only just caught up with it as i've been banned from the computer for a while D: this is just amazing- you write so well and the whole story is so imaginative and original! this has to be one of my fave stories :D :D this chapter was kinda sad...i felt really sorry for Gerard even though he killed Sara and Bob. i really hope things work out for Frank with Gerard...he's such a good friend for him and it's so obvious how much they care about each other! the ending made me lol...such a nice touch to the chapter. Frankie is so cute hahaha! can't WAIT to read more so please update soon...i'm gunna go rate this now xD
Author's responselol that's fine. i'm just glad you like it! i love your story too, "you'll never fit in much kid". i just read your latest chapter and i was 'naaawing so much people were staring at me :S
- why do you have to be so good at writing?????? this story is amazing!!!! and to think it started as a competition to see who could write the best frerard story (that jimmy + i gave up on)
Author's responsewhy do you have to be so good at...FOOD? and BASE? and SCIENCE? and VIOLIN? lol, did jimmy ever even write that story?
(#) perfectzombie 2011-04-25 12:14:39 PMHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMFG i still cant stop laughing x] that ending was so fucking hilarious and also this bit: I don't want to, I have to," said Gerard.
"What do you mean, you have to?" LynZ inquired. "Don't you think you've done enough?"
"There's something else."
"He doesn't know," piped Frank. "He has feminine intuition."
"Shut up Frank, I'm not a woman!"
seriously omg :')
anyway UPDATE SOON
Author's responselol that's one of my favourite parts too. I made MYSELF laugh. odd? yes. i am.
(#) serialegocrusher 2011-04-26 10:03:53 AMasdfghjklmcibcfew
I mean wow.
I read it all in one go, and I can honestly say, I love every bit of this story. Which is weird, 'cause I don't simply "love" stuff out of nowhere.
But everything's perfect.
Your writing style.
Grammar. (yes, a nazi I am)
The fact that I have not a single clue of what's gonna happen and how's it gonna end.
Though the chapters could be a bit longer.. (but that's just me being egocentric and a tad bit impatient :D)
Either I'm loosing my criticizing ability, or you're too perfect for your own good D:
Author's responseMe? Perfect? well, i definitely haven't heard that before! but i'm really pleased you like it so much, honestly i'm very surprised it's going down so well! please keep reading and reviewing; i'll try and make the next chapter nice and long but i have a feeling i'll fail miserably :( thanks!