(#) emocutter91 2011-05-06wow, I really loved this chapter:) and I personally don't mind the wait as much because, hello, at least you try:) unlike some people i know..... :) anyway, I did like this chapter and it was cute and funny as well as striking up some other emotions because the part with the book Gerard kept and the faint scars... Well I have many books and many more scars than I would like to admit, but you really know how to hit on different emotions and you keep a really good balance. I'm looking forward to the next update:) Oh, and I think 1. Ray and Mikey both get together with a girl. 2. Ray gets both girls and then you make Mikey all pouty for a bit until he meets somebody else. 3. None of them get together but are really good friends who flirt a lot. But that's just a few ideas, so... Yeah. Anyway, once again, AWESOME update:) xoxo
Author's responseYou, my deary, are an absolute babe. Thank you for your ideas ^_^ I'm not sure which route i'll go down. Also, you always review, which is lovely of you. Otherwise i think i would have given up by now... It's really nice to have people giving feedback ^_^
(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-07-06classs i love this:) when he saw franks nice body lol i kinda wanted him to see it more, nut i guess he will in time haha XD
anyway i love it and god ray tut tut a quickly hehe made me laugh, like i said brilliantly written and i'm off to read more yipeeee :D
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