Frank: I'm drowning in the pain, breaking down again. Looking for a lifeline.
- Before I read the chapter I have to just tell you if you saw my face when I was trying to figure out why I got an email for I'm just a kid lol Did you change it or is ficwad having a stroke?
Author's responseYeah, I did change it. Shoulda mentioned that, sorry bout that. xD
- Okay finished the chapter, wow, poor Frank. I had a drunk for a father, I'm just glad he was never violent. He would just drink until he past out, if I didn't have my big brother with me I would have gotten hit by a car at 4 when I was playing outside by myself. Shit I went on a tangent, anyway, really great chapter, and surprise me with who's POV it is going to be in the next one.
(#) xxXLadyOfSorrowsXxx 2011-05-07 08:37:48 AM1. jaime next c;
2. oh no....so miey has a gf and jaime likes him? i really hope they end up together.
3. i want to kill franks dad. 16 times. each one more deadly and gorey than the next. and then bring him back to clean up the mess, only to get a knife when he isnt looking, stab him in the chest 67 times then slit his throat. i hope he's afraid.
updateeeee!!! love this story xx
(#) MikeyWayIsAdorkable 2011-05-07 09:42:01 AMDamn, Julia, why? Just why? Damn that Dover girl to hell for ruining my chances with Mikey -_- Anyways, you better have fun at the concert tomorrow night. Happy birthday, babe ;P
The story? Yeah, the end, I was screaming at the computer screen, and my mom thought I was crazy. Why does poor Frankie have to be abused? Why can't anyone else see he is being freaking abused?!
For the next chapter you should me (lmfao, that's what she said) Actually, I kinda want to see what's going with Monty's life :)
(#) DeathCookie 2011-05-10 07:15:52 PMNOOOOOO JAIME AND MIKEY NEED TO BE TOGETHER :'(
LUL MY BOYFRIEND IS THE CUPCAKE DESTROYER AND YOU SHOULD DEF. MAKE THE NEXT POV JAIME...
ACTUALLY, I THINK YOU SHOULD PICK BREE ( OR ME ;)) AND LET A LITTLE TIME PASS SO THAT MIKEY AND THE "DOVER" GIRL'S RELATIONSHIP WILL FLOURISH (OR SINK) AND WE CAN GET HER REACTION
IM TYPING IN CAPS BECAUSE IM EXCITED