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Snape's Undying Love for Lily
2 reviewsThere's a cry deep in the night, coming from the dungeons. Who is it? None other than Snape crying. But why? A letter here explains all. Please rr! [One-shot]
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Snape's Undying Love for Lily
(#) uppsydaisy 2006-05-27
Story has great potential but is a little confusing. You need a beta reader to polish it to perfection so that the reader can see the story the same way you do.Author's response
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(#) Ithilwen 2006-08-05
Maybe this would get rated back up if you tweaked the exaggerated sap and OOC a little more. Then it would fall more clearly into the parody category. It's high, but it's not making it over the top, so I'm not laughing.Author's response
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