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Snape's Undying Love for Lily

There's a cry deep in the night, coming from the dungeons. Who is it? None other than Snape crying. But why? A letter here explains all. Please rr! [One-shot]

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Romance - Characters: Harry, James, Lily, Snape - Published: 2006/05/25 - Updated: 2006/05/25 - 454 words - Complete

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• Snape's Undying Love for Lily

  (#) uppsydaisy 2006-05-27 05:22:46 AM

  Story has great potential but is a little confusing. You need a beta reader to polish it to perfection so that the reader can see the story the same way you do.

  Author's response

  Thanks :D

• Snape's Undying Love for Lily

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-08-05 05:14:52 PM

  Maybe this would get rated back up if you tweaked the exaggerated sap and OOC a little more. Then it would fall more clearly into the parody category. It's high, but it's not making it over the top, so I'm not laughing.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the comment and suggestions!

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