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the wrong "Way"

you all love it...you all know it will never happen though....you barly see these...IIIITTTT'SSS FRIKEY!!!!!(FRANK +MIKEY FOR THE ...UMMM...SLOWER PEOPLE...SRRY THAT WAS RUDE...UMM) JUS READ IF YOU...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Drama,Fantasy,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2011/05/07 - Updated: 2011/05/08 - 2440 words

Reviews

• the wrong "Way"

  (#) Scarlet_Flame_666 2011-05-08 03:05:00 AM

  I love it!! A great begining to an awsome story!! Update soon!!
  
  xxSxx

• the wrong "Way"

  (#) killjoy4life 2011-05-08 03:23:19 PM

  thanks!! ..i wud type back to u^ in my AR box but ficwad is jacking up i guess. and there was frikey in there,even thoug it wasnt much,but its al leading up. OH AND SCARLET,YOU WIL GET A SHOUT OUT IN THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR BEINGTHE FIRST REVIEW! LUVZ U BUNCHES xxx-auther

• the wrong "Way"

  (#) Kid_Vicous 2011-06-07 11:17:49 PM

  Jesus. I'm not reading this until I see some line spacing. Dialogue starts on a new line. Paragraphs seperate text. But this is just one big wall of writing that to me is impossible to plough through. Maybe the story is pretty good underneath it - I don't know and I'm not going to try and find out. Fix it and I'll give it another try.

  Author's response

  well im so sory.i was in a rush and did the bes i could,you dont have to read my storie if you dont want to.i couldnt care less.

• the wrong "Way"

  (#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-06-11 09:48:43 AM

  Erm, this is kind of impossible to read. I just saw all the text and was like "hell no." im sorry, I bet it's really good but my eyes will not cope with such strain. :S

  Author's response

  im sorry for the lack of spacing but i didnt have much time like i told the other person.i updated about three of my stories in a 3 hour period,but im trying top get then spaced.im happy that you,at least,were kind about telling me this.ill try so plz bear through this with me.

• the wrong "Way"

  (#) I_am_a_Graveyard 2011-06-13 03:10:16 AM

  I'm the same, I really want to read it but it's hard to read. I know you were in a rush so I understand but maybe you could fix it?

• the wrong "Way"

  (#) TheBambooMuncher 2011-06-13 06:56:54 AM

  So... can you please get someone to beta this for you?

• the wrong "Way"

  (#) JCproductions 2011-08-29 02:10:56 AM

  I agree with Kid_Vicious, that thing's a trainwreck. And I believe you were more rude to her than she was to you. JS.

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