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Without the Awkwardness

by grenouille 5 Reviews

A slightly weird, and very AU 7th year for Harry and co. full of love, lust and a few surprises. Not all good things come in small packages. Harry/Many. One-shot.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2011/05/23 - Updated: 2011/05/24 - 6114 words - Complete

Reviews

  • Without the Awkwardness

    (#) jabarber69 2011-05-23 10:40:24 PM

    WoW, never thought I would like a story where millicent bulstrode and harry potter were lovers/married etc...but wOw! oh yeah and the lucky bugger getting to spend all that time with all those beautiful girls!!!!

    Author's response

    To be honest, I never thought I'd write one, either. grin Thanks for your kind words once again.

    grenouille
  • Without the Awkwardness

    (#) Yanagi-wa 2011-05-24 02:57:21 PM

    This was really good. I never thought of Harry and Millie.

    Author's response

    Thanks. I just blame overly randy bunnies //.

    grenouille
  • Without the Awkwardness

    (#) Darkmark66 2011-05-25 09:53:17 AM

    Fantastic story Harry/Millicent is very rare and a refreshing change. She is an often mocked character I think its unfair.

    In second year if she had to duel Hermione who would know not only how to win but how to make it looks easy or hurt a headlock might be the only way to win and avoid looking bad.

    I am glad Herry/Hermione did not work out as I never thought it could she is too pushy.

    Ron I thought was always Harry's Wormtail and I thought Percy was a Death Eater in the books. Ginny the crazy fangirl enough said and we never did find out after her second year if she had a horcrux in her head or was ever really treated for having a Dark Lord control her for a school year.

    Thanks for the line "withdrawn little boy from the cupboard" when the Headmaster said that line about Harry and the cupboard in the Half blood prince film Harry should have punched him.

    I am glad Harry had fun descovered girls, mothers and a hot teacher. Su was a great surprise as she is a very overlooked character thanks to how man people seem to hate Cho I think.

    A good end to the story for the Potters and the others. I hope for more Harry/Millicent in the future.

    Author's response

    Thanks for your kind words. I, too, was really surprised when I saw how few Harry/Millie stories there are so I'm glad to be able to contribute to that pairing.

    Don't know if I'll be writing another one, but I do have a Harry/Pansy in the works. Hopefully, that will sate your desire for different pairings.

    grenouille
  • Without the Awkwardness

    (#) LabRat 2011-09-04 01:13:11 AM

    Yeah, no need to wonder what one of the motivations of Hermione hooking up with that Sioux chap was.

    HA! I knew Luna wasn't nuts. It's always fun to read stories where Luna actually finds the creatures she'd spent her youth teased about. I love reading it, and adding my own, "IN YO FACE!", every time I do so.

    That was an enjoyable read, it was.

    Author's response

    I figured I owed Hermione for taking Harry from her. She deserves a good, Weasley-free life.

    I do like Luna, but I find it next to impossible to write her and keep her believable. She, too, deserves happiness and, to me, that means her 'innerestin' critters'.

    Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

    grenouille
  • Without the Awkwardness

    (#) pott4grager 2012-08-18 09:57:19 AM

    Great story, enjoyed it very much. Couldn't rate it as it has reached max but I reckon the max should be a lot higher especially for this one.

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