Harry gets a nasty little wake-up call from some Gnomes.
(#) HarryGinnyTonks 2011-05-30 10:27:23 PMFun story. Not familiar with the video game but I'm getting a good sense of it. Like the description of the boxes (randomly placed by the natives). Keep it up.
Author's responseThanks for the review. I know that the boxes were completely random, but they were the same in the games, and I tried to put them in with an explanation just vague enough to work. Apparently, I was successful! ^_^ Expect a new chapter soon.