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Chapter 3: What to do?

Wondering what to do and most likley the first dumped coffee ever in the way household...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters: Gerard Way - Published: 2011/06/04 - Updated: 2011/06/04 - 1014 words

Reviews

• Clear Blue, What's Behind You?

  (#) xxXLadyOfSorrowsXxx 2011-06-04 04:30:35 PM

  l-o-v-e-d it.
  so so so so much.
  more soon! xx

  Author's response

  glad you like it^^
  hehe i'll try to update sooner;)
  xx katie

• Clear Blue, What's Behind You?

  (#) andreajp 2011-06-05 09:27:36 PM

  Yay! I'm so happy you updated! The anticipation is killing me to find out what's going on with the girl. I mean for all I know, she could be a ghost lol. Hope you update soon.

  Author's response

  i made someone happy:'D yay!
  lol yeah she could be for all you know...:P
  BUT I STILL DON'T HAVE A NAME FOR HER! SHOCKED FACE

• Clear Blue, What's Behind You?

  (#) AdnarimSmada 2011-06-09 03:41:59 PM

  I would really love to see what happens with this girl. You have me intrigued...if that means anything to you. :)
  
  You're getting better. Perfect grammar in this chapter and only two spelling mistakes:
  
  likley: likely
  
  realise: realize. (It has a z,not an s. I know it is weird. That's just the way English is sometimes though.)
  
  Like I said before,if you ever get sick of my editing,just tell me to shut the eff up and I will gladly do so. :)

• Clear Blue, What's Behind You?

  (#) AdnarimSmada 2011-06-09 03:48:43 PM

  Oh sorry,found another spelling error. Sorry,I'm a little O.C.D when people give me an opportunity to correct grammar.
  
  apologise: apologize. (Again with the z thing,I don't know why my native language likes them so much. Ha,ha.)

  Author's response

  thank you so much again! i'll correct it as soon as this is typed;)
  and don't worry about it...it's what i wanted people to do! it's helping me so much! remember: i want to improve my english by writing this story so your help is very appreciated:)
  i'm currently working on the next chapter, but i have some problems with the story line, because the way i originally planned it...well i don't like it as much as i used to:L
  
  xoxo katie

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