Wondering what to do and most likley the first dumped coffee ever in the way household...
- Yay! I'm so happy you updated! The anticipation is killing me to find out what's going on with the girl. I mean for all I know, she could be a ghost lol. Hope you update soon.
Author's responsei made someone happy:'D yay!
lol yeah she could be for all you know...:P
BUT I STILL DON'T HAVE A NAME FOR HER! SHOCKED FACE
(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-06-09 03:41:59 PMI would really love to see what happens with this girl. You have me intrigued...if that means anything to you. :)
You're getting better. Perfect grammar in this chapter and only two spelling mistakes:
realise: realize. (It has a z,not an s. I know it is weird. That's just the way English is sometimes though.)
Like I said before,if you ever get sick of my editing,just tell me to shut the eff up and I will gladly do so. :)
(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-06-09 03:48:43 PMOh sorry,found another spelling error. Sorry,I'm a little O.C.D when people give me an opportunity to correct grammar.
apologise: apologize. (Again with the z thing,I don't know why my native language likes them so much. Ha,ha.)
Author's responsethank you so much again! i'll correct it as soon as this is typed;)
and don't worry about it...it's what i wanted people to do! it's helping me so much! remember: i want to improve my english by writing this story so your help is very appreciated:)
i'm currently working on the next chapter, but i have some problems with the story line, because the way i originally planned it...well i don't like it as much as i used to:L