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The Love I haven't told
3 ReviewsGerard Way is a boy who lost his great friends/neighbors at an early age.
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The Love I haven't told
(#) paralove13 2011-06-05 11:33:02 AM
Good idea! But how would a six year old know "whores as fuck?" Other than that this sounds awesome. Favorited. HEHE. Update soon. If you're looking for a good fic would you mind checking out mine, The Bandit that Stole His Heart. -
The Love I haven't told
(#) AgentKilljoy 2011-06-05 04:55:51 PM
LOL. Great story and he could of heard his dad said say Whores as fuck" right? Lot of kids would know what it iis cause theses kids now a days are getting more and more mature.
This was a great story plot. If your going to add Lyn-z, keep in mind that she didnt have a dad. he left the family and she never knew him. -
The Love I haven't told
(#) MCRmy_WeeN 2011-06-06 07:14:03 AM
about the 'whores as fuck' thing.. it's not actually Gerard's POV, so maybe as the narrator of the story, I wrote it that way.xD anyway, thanks for the comments and suggestions! :)) update soon. x)