frank.all i have to say 0.0
(#) comatosejoyx 2011-06-15 08:37:02 PMWow. This is just unreadable. Maybe if you weren't rude to the people who reviewed and took their notes in board your story would be much clearer and you'd have readers. I'll just repeat what they said; the space button is there for a reason. Use spellcheck and brush up on your punctuation.
(#) xXxPlasticSmilesxXx 2011-06-26 08:27:39 PMwell i personally like your story :)u should keep going and im excited for the next chapter! but it is more readable with the double spaces but idc about your punctuation i can tell what ur saying. i like how u put nevershoutnever and dahive vanity from blood on the dance floor in your story andother 2 of my favorite bands after mcr :)
Author's responsehaha tho are some of mine to.i was thinking about putting somthing about 'Black Veil Brides' in there.and erm mabey a guest star appearance? >:3
i hopes you like andy sixx and arvil lavigne!!