A twist on a well known children's story. Rydon.
(#) Kill_the_mainstream 2011-06-14 05:13:04 AMWow! I love this!
The only thing I could suggest is to try to split it into paragraphs. It would just be easier to read this way.
Keep up the good work!
Author's responseI know. But I get confused trying to do that. Sorry if that bothers you.