(Steampunk frerard) When Gerard is saved after an attack it leaves him not quite as human as he once was. But as ringmaster of a special kind of circus a young mechanic keeps him ticking and steals...
(#) shortygirl 2011-06-08 02:25:40 PMWhat's steampunk?
Author's responseSteampunk is kinda like a subgenre of fantasy. I love it because the imagery of it is amazing. It's hard to explain but its basically victorian but with a technical twist. Everything is quite mechanical and technological, but mostly ran on victorian methods like steam. If you google image it you get some amazing art work, thats the best way to find out about it in my opinion :)
(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-06-08 02:31:34 PMSteampunk... Wtf?
I had a feeling this was going to be about robots at the title... No idea it was going to be this awesome! Dude... (I honestly hate to say this) this reminds me of Panic! At The Disco. Just the whole machinery bit. Like... The Ballad Of Mona Lisa video like this. And now I'm rambling...
So this is the prolouge? It turned out well. I couldn't tell who was who, though, when it started out. Like... Was it Frankie or Gee? But then I thought how you just finished a Ferard with Gee as the dominant one, so might as well let Frankie have a go at it. Make Gee the shy one. Lovely xD Wonder how that smut's gonna turn out...
Author's responseAhh I'm glad you like it xD For a second there I thought you were horrified :') And I completely agree! When I saw that video I nearly died of happiness cos' clearly that must mean P!ATD like steampunk, right? ... Right!? xD
Haha, I wanted to make everything a bit vague at first and not give too much away. But who says Gee's gonna be the sub ;) I have a feeling the smut is gonna be hella fun to write for this one xD
(#) superman-sidekick 2011-06-08 03:12:24 PMWoooow Ray, thought I'd drop this a review, I'm loving it so far! Matt would be proud if he read I'm sure ;) Anyway, really descriptive and original, you got the period just right and I just love the whole concept of it :D The steam punk is so interesting, I can't wait to see how it turns out!
Love love love :D xxx
Author's responseEeek thank you :DD Matt would be thrilled ;D He'd probably fall out of his chair and die of happiness XD I'm really glad you're liking it :D
love love love ^^ xox
- I loved every sentence of it. Steam punk has always fascinated me ever since I saw a steam punk computer (nerd much AJ). Anybody that doesn't know what steam punk is all about don't knock it til you actually get it. So you have successfully mixed to things I love to look at and wish I had, stream punk stuff, and MCR.(Yes I want to collect the members... Stop starring at me)
And by the way Rachel my dear, please for the love of me reading this without freaking the fuck out, keep the clowns if there is any to a minimum, unless they're awesome like Ray as a clown, not so scary anything that resembles Pennywise, I will cut you.
Can't wait to read the next chapter, and yet another Frerard addiction begin. ^_^
Words are fun!
Author's responseHey, it's not nerdy, who doesn't love a bit of steampunk? ;D I saw a steampunk ladybird once... best. thing. ever! xD And whilst we're talking of best things ever, who wouldn't want the members of mcr!? I mean really? xD
And don't worrryy, there will be clowns but they're gonna be extra special. I don't think steampunk clowns would look anything like Pennywise so... please don't cut me xD
Next chapter will be up soon enough, just not this weekend cos' I'ma going to download festivaal! :DD
Words are so fun! :D
(#) Destroya_Poizon 2011-06-11 01:58:01 PMHoly crap this is so good. I love it. You need to write more! I wanna know what happens nexts!! This story is like.....woah!! I love it!! Idk what else to say but its freaking awesome sauce!!!! I'm so excited to see what you have next.
Author's responseHaha well thanks xD Next chapter should be up soon x)
- Just to let you know, I keep thinking about this daily checking for an update already, I have a feeling I'm going to drive you crazy lol. Also I had a dream of My Chem all gothy, steampunky, me fucking gustaness, I have you to thank ^_^
Author's responseAhh well I've had a busy weekend in a field but I'm writing the next chapter as we speak so never fear ;D
And that sounds like a very interesting dream... you're welcome XD
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-09-13 10:39:31 PMTo tell you the truth, I'm not a huge fan of steam punk. But this is fucken amazing! Awesome writing and such an original idea! I'm hooked already. Roll on the next chapter! :D
Author's responseAh well I'm glad you decided to give this try anyway :D Thanks for the review