by marissasorrentino
2 Reviews
Category: Panic! At The Disco -
Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters: -
Published: 2011/06/16 - Updated: 2011/06/16 - 1078 words
Reviews
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Awh. This is cute. Update soon! :) I want Ryan to speak!
Author's response
He will speak soon. I put a week for the spell but in the book its 3 days. So you know first whats going to happen.
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I really like the twist on this old story.
However, I suggest breaking bits of it into smaller paragraphs.
Also I noticed a few spelling mistakes.
But overall this was a great story. I look forward to day 3.
Author's response
sorry about the spelling errors. I really try the best I can. As for the paragraphs I don't understand it. I would get confused, sorry if that bothers you. But otherwise thanks for liking my story. :)