- very good, i am kinda not all to romantic so in one part i said eww(but it ain't your fault, it's mine i am immature) i really liked it keep on writing
Author's responseThanks for the review, and you cant say i did not warn you. Glad you liked it after you got past the eww part.
(#) NuuoaEclaire 2006-05-30Ahh, so that's what happened. Thanks for the compliment by the way. I like your story, keep it up, you do have talent.
Author's responseMe talent... this coming for you.. i think i might have accidently sucked up. Glad you liked it. Wow I think I am still in shock... Me talent.. this coming form someone who read my writing. Never heard that one before. Thanks so much. Though I still feel like a suck up, oh well.
- Um...Archie's 18 and Atlanta's 17 is that right? Why would they be--um--you know, and in the hallway, then? All the same it's really good, and the rating's probably a good one. I mean, you don't want 13 year olds--especially 13 year olds who act like 5 year olds when it comes to fluff--reading about...that.
Author's responseI think Archies 17 and Atlanta's 16, but you cant say i did not give you a warning... I actually gave two. Glad you liked it.
- Eh heh..a little inappropriate, but you rated it, it was my fault for not listening...Bah, it was good except in halfway when in Archie's dream they had...uh...yah.
Author's responseHey thanks, but I did warn you... twice (its rated NC-17 and has the X warning). And I know Archie's dream was a little well not for children. Though unfortunatly the WHOLE story was very easy to write. Oh well I gave fair warning.
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