Stupid, perceptive younger brother.
- Oh, I see what you’re doing. Clever little Wankie. It may work on them but it hasn’t worked on me. Nuh-uh, I can see right through to your blackened soul, you tiny motherfucker. Don’t fall for it Ray, it’s a trick!
Everyone in the room was looking at me like a crackhead! I absolutely get giddy when I see this has a new chapter! I thought Frankie was going to kill Alex when he said coffee stunts growth lol. Can't wait to see how Lynz fits into this story.
Author's responsePeople looking at you like a crackhead? Now I can relate with you THERE. :P I can't see how LynZ fits either...cos I honestly don't know!
- It's Ballato, you had it right. Don't believe everything you see on the Internet. It's a lot like Los Angeles; some places are awesome, some places are inaccessible, some places are exclusive, and some places are so sketch, it's like Inception trying to figure out what's credible or not.
Yay, extended metaphors. Back to the review.
Mirthful and brilliant as always. Don't worry about not having a plan for Lyn-Z just yet; if there's one thing I love in writing, it's twists I don't know the direction of. You'll figure something out. (:
Author's responseCool. I'm pretty sure it says Balto on some of those sites and I get pissed off at myself when I've got me facts wrong! :P Thanks so much for continuing to read and enjoy, I'm pretty sure there will be quite a few twists in this story...partly because I sometimes forget what I've already written! :S
(#) CosmicZombie 2011-06-27 12:54:02 PMOMG, this is so amazing! no one else writes like you...your stories are always so original :) this chapter was hilarious...i was actually in school while reading it, so it was really hard not to laugh...if i had, everyone would have thought i was crazy. i am, but that's not the point xD
anyways, i really love this, can't wait til your next update!
Author's responseAh you updated! Sorry, sorry, I only just saw. I'ma go read it instantly after I reply to this cos that's how much I loves it!!!
Cool, I'm pleased that my writing is original at least. I try not to write what's already been done but sometimes it's hard. :( Everyone thinks I'm crazy too, it's not so bad when they let you out of the straight jacket.
(#) annabel-lee 2011-07-05 10:05:39 AMI recently started reading this and when I was reading my mom yelled at me about blueberry pancakes and I was still laughing and slap-happy from reading the last chapter and my mom looked at me like I was high and criminally insane. Why don't parents ever get used to the fact that when My Chem fans do things MCR related slap-happiness and hysterical laughter are bound to occur? That sounded strangly formal... Anyway I loved the break up scene and I hope frerard-ness will still show up. And I agree with Gerard, Frank (in this fanfic at least) is rather manipulative. :) I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's responseI know, right? They just don't get it. I bet if my parents got into MCR too they'd quit it with those "we need to get that girl checked out" looks.
Lol I personally love the break-up seen too, even though I wrote it :P Frerard or no? I'm not saying a damn thing. ;) Thank you for reading, reviewing and loving!