(#) Haze 2011-06-29 11:19:11 PM
Weird. I read the first draft, the one where he and Jamia have a "fun day," and now I'm confused. xD It's all good, though, I understand the new chapter fine. I'm just comparing the two in my head and it's a bit discombobulating. Anyway, love the story.
Oh, sorry about that. I had planned on just using that one, but Ficwad deleted the story. Unfortunately, I didn't save that particular chapter on my computer so I re-wrote it, changing a few things. And thanks, glad you like it.