(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-06-30Shizah, it's long for me. Really? 7k+ words? Man, the most I can type myself is 5k. But, this was detailed, something I like. Details paints that picutre that Party sketched.
You make Violet seem... Quiet. Like she keeps to herself, like she's always thinking.
Damn, now I have to change shit in chapter... 10? 11? I unno, lost track.
Author's responseNo, shes just extremely tired and confused at the whole Neon Posion thing (hahaha yes, I gave them a name.) and is trying tosort out where she fits in in our nice little academy.
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