As if things weren't bad enough...
- Shit! I don't think I can put a coherent thought together to for a proper review! For the love of god I hope you can update this soon!
Author's responseAha :') I know I like only just replied to your other review but I'm gonna reply to this too because you had the time to review :) I've typed up about half of the chapter now so it SHOULD hopefully be up tomorrow. Plus this one should be longer too - I've noticed they've been getting shorter "/ thanks for reviewing! Xoxo
(#) PandaFrankie 2011-07-06 05:41:21 PMI love this story! It has so much suspense, and I damn near cried when Linda talked to Gerard and Frankie for the last time- it was so real. I love tje way you incorporate lyrics and quotes and ideas in- the way The Black Parade came for Linda in Frank's dream, the forming of the band, everything. I loved iy. Olot of it had me laughing, like Alicia's dare XD Genius! Only bad thing is, your grammar kinda throws me off the story. It's a bit distracting. Never mind, though, nobody's perfect :3
I finished this chapter and I thought it was the end of the story and I was like FFFUUU NOOOOOO and then I checked the date and I was like, "Oh, it's recent, YAY MORE FICS FOR ME :D"
Keep writing, you have extreme potential! Xo
Author's responseThank you! Really glad you're enjoying it :D I'll keep in mind what you said about the grammar and try to improve :) xoxo