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Give Me A Shot To Remember

by sushiipodrocks 4 Reviews

As if things weren't bad enough...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2011/07/05 - Updated: 2011/07/05 - 2322 words - Complete

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  • Is It Hard Understanding I'm Incomplete?

    (#) Bitch-Bot 2011-07-05 11:35:28 AM

    i think they cut off the end of this

    Author's response

    Yeah they did, thanks for letting me know. I've re-uploaded the chapter now, but I think it may take a bit for it to appear. Thanks :) xoxo
  • Is It Hard Understanding I'm Incomplete?

    (#) sushiipodrocks 2011-07-05 12:16:08 PM

    Yeah they did, thanks for letting me know. I've re-uploaded the chapter now, but I think it may take a bit for it to appear. Thanks :) xoxo
  • Is It Hard Understanding I'm Incomplete?

    (#) andreajp 2011-07-05 05:07:46 PM

    Shit! I don't think I can put a coherent thought together to for a proper review! For the love of god I hope you can update this soon!

    Author's response

    Aha :') I know I like only just replied to your other review but I'm gonna reply to this too because you had the time to review :) I've typed up about half of the chapter now so it SHOULD hopefully be up tomorrow. Plus this one should be longer too - I've noticed they've been getting shorter "/ thanks for reviewing! Xoxo
  • Is It Hard Understanding I'm Incomplete?

    (#) PandaFrankie 2011-07-06 05:41:21 PM

    I love this story! It has so much suspense, and I damn near cried when Linda talked to Gerard and Frankie for the last time- it was so real. I love tje way you incorporate lyrics and quotes and ideas in- the way The Black Parade came for Linda in Frank's dream, the forming of the band, everything. I loved iy. Olot of it had me laughing, like Alicia's dare XD Genius! Only bad thing is, your grammar kinda throws me off the story. It's a bit distracting. Never mind, though, nobody's perfect :3
    I finished this chapter and I thought it was the end of the story and I was like FFFUUU NOOOOOO and then I checked the date and I was like, "Oh, it's recent, YAY MORE FICS FOR ME :D"
    Keep writing, you have extreme potential! Xo

    Author's response

    Thank you! Really glad you're enjoying it :D I'll keep in mind what you said about the grammar and try to improve :) xoxo

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