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Life
(#) japulapu 2011-07-25
Good plot, but it seems to drag just a bit. You need to check for mistakes once your done typing. There are a few spelling and grammatical errors, but all is forgiven. Like I said earlier, the plot is quite interesting and makes the reader want more, but the style is a tad boring. But you're sure to get better with practice. I am awaiting the next chapter. Overall, a good job and a captivating story.
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