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Stay Right Here

Late at night, Frank and Gerard lie together and discuss what could be the most important desicion of their lives. My first one-shot, so it's kinda shit. Rate and review if you can be bothered. -C xo

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2011/07/23 - Updated: 2011/08/21 - 1589 words - Complete

Reviews

• Stay Right Here

  (#) YourFamousLastWords 2011-07-23 04:00:22 PM

  That was pretty good, better than mine xD
  
  We'llCarryOn,
  (:

  Author's response

  Aaaw :'3 Thank you!
  Hah, don't say that. I wanna read it! What's it called?
  -C xo

• Stay Right Here

  (#) killjoy_blackrose 2011-07-23 04:40:55 PM

  he i have to agree, it's good:)
  
  but did he stay or not?x)
  
  

  Author's response

  Thank you :D
  Yeah, sorry about that! I'm gonna edit it later and it'll probably be clearer ;) Thank you for reviewing :3
  -C xo

• Stay Right Here

  (#) missalexandria 2011-07-24 12:28:33 AM

  This is good. But I wish you would make it longer, cause it would be nice to see them together. But either way, it was good. :)

  Author's response

  Yeah, I was just thinking that. I didn't really know how to finish it though, and when I showed it to my friends they were all, 'Oh, that one with the Taylor Swifty reference?' XD
  I shall try and edit it to make it seem clearer :3 Thanks for your review!

• Stay Right Here

  (#) thatnerdygirl 2011-07-25 05:18:09 PM

  Love it, Do you intend to write more? X

  Author's response

  Thank you :) No, sorry, this is only a one-shot. It only took me like half an hour to write and about twenty minutes to edit because the idea came out of nowhere while I was drying my hair XD
  Thanks for your review!
  -C xø

• Stay Right Here

  (#) writingechelon 2011-08-14 09:04:29 AM

  I loved this, and I love the ambiguity of not knowing if he's going to stay or not.
  Keep it up!

  Author's response

  Thank you for that. It's my first one-shot and I know that, like all fics, it has it's flaws, but that's what makes fanfics great, and what helps an author to flourish and grow :3
  -C xo

• Stay Right Here

  (#) lambchop101 2011-08-18 08:46:38 PM

  I really like this, it made me giggle when he said "in prison?".
  Really great, I love how it's only dialogue.

  Author's response

  Hah, thanks x3 I was a little wary of putting that in. i didn't want Gee to come off as a dickhead, but I suppose it's okay :)
  Yeah, that was a little difficult to do. I couldn't go and be like, 'Then Frank put his arm around Gerard' like in my usual stories. It was strange writing like this but I liked it.
  Thanks for your review! -C xo
  
  Hah, thanks x3 I was a little wary of putting that in. i didn't want Gee to come off as a dickhead, but I suppose it's okay :)
  Yeah, that was a little difficult to do. I couldn't go and be like, 'Then Frank put his arm around Gerard' like in my usual stories. It was strange writing like this but I liked it.
  Thanks for your review! -C xo

• Stay Right Here

  (#) aweirdtree 2011-08-19 12:20:15 PM

  i like this veeeeeery much, ehehe :D really, it's awesome, it's somehow different (: gonna be in my favourites xd

  Author's response

  Aaaw, seriously? Thank you! It's great to know I'm in your Favourites :D
  Thank you for reviewing ^___^
  -C xo

• Stay Right Here

  (#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-08-21 04:29:29 PM

  aww that was vey cute, it kept me waiting all the way through it like 'ohhh is he sttaying or going gahhh i dunno' lol i loved it, very good for a first one-shot :)
  its really great, i love how gerard said ok calm down taylor swift XD its really ironic cuz i have included a taylor swift line thingy in my fic lol i havnt posted yet tho XD haha
  anyway its really sweet and you should do more :P
  chazom
  xx

  Author's response

  Hahah yeah, I wasn't sure if the tension was enough but I guess it was ;3
  Thanks :D Your reviews make it all the better ^____^
  Oooh, that's awesome! What's it called? I love me some fanfics ;)
  Yeah, I have a few new one-shots planned out for the future and I'm in the process of writing a story right now :)
  -C xo

• Stay Right Here

  (#) BulletProofHeart 2011-08-22 05:51:28 AM

  Oh my god, I love it :D The reactions are so realistic and in a way it was almost like an old married couple fighting :D Pleasee write more??
  Sonic

  Author's response

  Hi Molly >w>
  Hahah, thanks! That's not really what I was aiming for but I guess that works too ;)
  I don't think I'll write anymore of this particular fic as it is a one-shot, but I've got some plans for the future so stay tuned.
  -C xo

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