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Hermione's Mistake
3 ReviewsSnape gets annoyed by Hermione’s persistent attempt to answer the questions he asked harry. So he decides to teach her a lesson and gives her a detention.
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Hermione's Mistake
(#) foreverfalling 2011-12-14 04:23:22 AM
This is intensely dark. Is there going to be more?
I mean... it was interesting. Rather messed up but interesting... It leaves a lot of questions. Will Snape be punished? Will someone in Slytherin take pity and help her?
How will she heal?
What else will happen? Will there be revenge in the story? There is so much that could happen.
I'd like to see more. Hopefully you might pick the story back up... -
Hermione's Mistake
(#) ginnyforharry 2012-08-05 06:59:31 PM
i enjoyed this story however if i may offer some helpful feedback i would like to inform you that your story is repeated twice. -
Hermione's Mistake
(#) ginnyforharry 2012-08-05 07:00:24 PM
and i believe your rating is off. this story should not be G. it should be R for sexual content.