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Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) offical-killjoy 2011-07-31
omg you sooooo need to update again :)Author's response
I definitely will :) Eventually.Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) Bad_Romance 2011-07-31
I usually don't read any stories on here other than Frank & OFCs, or Gerard & OFC'S. But this story has completely captured me! I love it. You are a amazing writer, and I love when this story gets updated. So, looking forward to a update :)Author's response
What the heck is OFC? :D
But, thank you so much ♥ I try. The next update will be soon.Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2011-07-31
No constructive criticism. I l o v e this story! :)
it's new, creative and real.
So, yes, I love.Author's response
Aww, and I love YOU ♥Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) Deirdre 2011-07-31
I love this story! It's very well written! Keep up the good work!
Author's response
Thank you :) I'm sure it loves you, too.Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) bythegraceofgod 2011-07-31
Do you really want me to be honest? Okay, I have absolutely nothing negative to say about this!
I can't believe you have up to chapter 56! I wish I could read them all tonight. I really would.
So excited for the next update!
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Wow, thank you :) The next one will be posted sometime today (of my time).
And I of course could post all of the chapters in one huge bulk-update, but I started to write this story over a year ago, so i want to fix a lot in it.Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) bythegraceofgod 2011-07-31
P.S. I love the title of this... McFly are one of my favourite bands!Author's response
Oh my god I can't believe someone got that! I love McFly!Fly Away, Dance on the Milky Way
(#) japulapu 2011-07-31
You should pat yourself on the back for this. Truth be told, I've been following this chapter from the beginning and I love the way you word your sentences. Every chapter is eventful and you never seem to be stuck in a rut. It is a very different story. I guess it's also one of the first stories where the characters resemble the real people. The story seems to drag just a little bit. I'm not saying things don't happen, but they happen at a slightly slow pace. But I guess that increases the suspense. That's the only thing I wanted to say. Good job so far.Author's response
... Is the way I word my sentences somehow different? Or am I just fat?
As for the slow pace, I won't go into any details because I don't want to give any spoilers, but one story twist takes like 40 chapters to progress... You'll see what I mean.
And thank you for the review!
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