His heart was lying down, the end was in sight.
(#) RydenBeliever 2011-08-01 02:01:52 AMAww poor Ryan!! Very good story, but an unhappy ending. I was sort of hoping that Brendon would turn up and help him, so a very good twist!! Love it, I'm almost in tears
Author's responseIn the end, if you think about it, it was a happy ending. For Ryan, though. He wouldn't have to go through anymore of all that. Ryan would be happy now, pain-free.
(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-08-01 09:06:30 AMWell done. Very dark. It a shame he took his own life, something I don't approve of, no matter what the circumstances, nothing is that bad, but all's fair in love and war, I suppose.
Author's responseThank you for reviewing. And it is a shame. But after all, it was Ryan's choice. He just didn't want to go through anymore pain than he was already in.
(#) Wicked_Lovely 2011-08-01 11:28:39 PMAwh, I was hoping for a happy ending.
I still can't help but be a little curious to how everyone else would take Ryan's death. But I guess it's up to us to decide.
Oh well, at least it was really good. Really well written and I just loved it.
Author's responseThank you for reviewing. Yeah, everyone can use their imagine to figure out how Ryan's friends would react to that. But they all knew Ryan's pain.
- Aww.. Thats sad but at least Ryan dosent hqve to go through that much pain after he died. This made me cry... But you did a pretty good job of describing how he felt..
Author's responseI know... :3 This was actually pretty easy to write. It was simple describing how he felt, I wrote from experience.