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The End

by Katrina_Adams 4 Reviews

His heart was lying down, the end was in sight.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama,Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2011/08/01 - Updated: 2011/08/01 - 930 words - Complete

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  • Colorblind

    (#) RydenBeliever 2011-08-01 02:01:52 AM

    Aww poor Ryan!! Very good story, but an unhappy ending. I was sort of hoping that Brendon would turn up and help him, so a very good twist!! Love it, I'm almost in tears

    Author's response

    In the end, if you think about it, it was a happy ending. For Ryan, though. He wouldn't have to go through anymore of all that. Ryan would be happy now, pain-free.
  • Colorblind

    (#) AdnarimSmada 2011-08-01 09:06:30 AM

    Well done. Very dark. It a shame he took his own life, something I don't approve of, no matter what the circumstances, nothing is that bad, but all's fair in love and war, I suppose.

    -Adnarim Smada

    Author's response

    Thank you for reviewing. And it is a shame. But after all, it was Ryan's choice. He just didn't want to go through anymore pain than he was already in.
  • Colorblind

    (#) Wicked_Lovely 2011-08-01 11:28:39 PM

    Awh, I was hoping for a happy ending.
    I still can't help but be a little curious to how everyone else would take Ryan's death. But I guess it's up to us to decide.
    Oh well, at least it was really good. Really well written and I just loved it.
    -xoxo Pansy.

    Author's response

    Thank you for reviewing. Yeah, everyone can use their imagine to figure out how Ryan's friends would react to that. But they all knew Ryan's pain.
  • Colorblind

    (#) patdfan01 2011-08-28 10:07:02 PM

    Aww.. Thats sad but at least Ryan dosent hqve to go through that much pain after he died. This made me cry... But you did a pretty good job of describing how he felt..

    Author's response

    I know... :3 This was actually pretty easy to write. It was simple describing how he felt, I wrote from experience.

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