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Early Sunsets Over Belleville

"I heard a machine being stopped and a nip as a needle was taken out of me. Then I felt nothing. I couldn’t hear, I couldn’t see, I couldn’t feel. I was dead."

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2011/08/02 - Updated: 2012/05/01 - 1068 words - Complete

Reviews

• Early Sunsets Over Belleville

  (#) DisenchantedEnding 2011-08-02 06:43:53 AM

  This was heartbreaking, really. How he could see and hear them, but he couldn't even let them know he was there. I had tears in my eyes at one point, but they never fell, or anything..

  Author's response

  Does that mean it was good and well written and you liked it?...

• Early Sunsets Over Belleville

  (#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-08-02 06:49:33 AM

  fuck that was sad, i literally had tears in my eyes and everything. beautifully written though, you should be proud of it.

  Author's response

  Thank you, I am.

• Early Sunsets Over Belleville

  (#) DisenchantedEnding 2011-08-02 07:41:14 AM

  Oh yeah, it does XD

  Author's response

  Yay! XD

• Early Sunsets Over Belleville

  (#) Danger-Taco-Freak 2011-08-02 07:41:21 AM

  I think it was brilliant! Now you just need to bring him back from the dead! holds fist up in a menacing way Plz? :D

  Author's response

  I don't know...I like it as one-shot...sorry Frankie.

• Early Sunsets Over Belleville

  (#) YourFamousLastWords 2011-08-02 09:49:19 AM

  Wow, I never though 'Early Sunsets Over Monroeville' could be interpreted like that.
  Great work, I loved it.

  Author's response

  I didn't want it to be another romance fic and I didn't want to write about vampires biting anyone so yeah I tried making it work my way (:
  
  Thank you :D

• Early Sunsets Over Belleville

  (#) CatscanFlyy 2011-11-11 10:15:47 AM

  So I don't really get it when people say they cry at fics, cause I like never do, but this had me steaming up. So beautifully writen but at the same time completely infuriating that no-one could hear Frank, I'm definatly going to have to go read some more of your work. Keep writing like this, it was so beautiful. x

  Author's response

  Thank you so, so much! (: xo

• Early Sunsets Over Belleville

  (#) LydiaWay 2012-10-12 01:43:52 AM

  fuck hat was so sad! i was properly imagining myself in Frankie's situation; must have been torturing! so well written; i loved it :D

• Early Sunsets Over Belleville

  (#) killjoy_blackrose 2013-04-28 08:02:02 AM

  Oh God this is so sad. Everynody keeps hoping for a happy ending but it never comes. Frank reaches out but nobody can head him, can see that he's still there. And it's so frustrating how they don't realize, how you can't do anything ;-;
  
  xo k
  
  (are you gonna write more fics? havn't seen you on here in ages)

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