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Run This Town
10 ReviewsOnly thing that's on my mind,is who's gonna run this town tonight.
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First of the Gang to Die
(#) MCRkilljoy 2011-08-08 12:50:06 PM
love this
umm if it not to much bother can u put in more torucher cause those parst ae the best -
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(#) Bitch-Bot 2011-08-08 01:20:00 PM
wow she had to have had the scariest mind ever! seriously all the violence is amazing i dont ming gore (luckily) but damn lornaigh you were a fucking strange person but also awesome at the came time
please update soon -
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(#) andreajp 2011-08-08 02:01:01 PM
Fuck me I was gagging reading about the eye part, I think I need to go puke, I'm such a pansy.
Can't wait to read the next one. -
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(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-08-08 03:04:43 PM
Wow Lornaigh, I'm breathless. It was brilliant.
Oh, long gone is the innocent Frank we knew and loved, though even through all of that, I think the thing I loved the most was that even though that bastard did those horrible things to him, Frank managed to keep his humanity, he made the death relatively painless just a hail of bullets to the brain.
I think that's the deepest blow you can give a cruel person like that. In a fucked up way.
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(#) thisnameistaken 2011-08-08 04:19:27 PM
AWWWWWWW YYYEEEEEAAAHHHHH!
Frank kick some serious ass!! -
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(#) ILoveGerardMCR 2011-08-08 04:25:38 PM
I think badass Frank is fucking sexy. LET HIM LIVE! -
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(#) imjustagirlnotahero 2011-08-08 11:32:12 PM
Frank is a motherfucking BADASS!
I'm glad he got the revenge he deserved and I'm SO FUCKING GLAD we got to read it. -
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(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-08-09 07:08:00 PM
I'm sorry but after reading and thinking about this chapter for a couple of days, I feel compelled to say that rape is most certainly NOT legal in marriage. I don't know how it is in Ireland you guys, but here in the U.S,where this story is set, we don't allow that horrible fuckery.
I suppose she was speaking of the thirties, (duh moment), but now days, that bull is not tolerated.
-Adnarim Smada
Author's response
Up until the nineteen sixties,rape was legal in marriage in the US,as well as most other places,including Ireland.
I'm sorry I sound like such a bitch!Obviously Lornaigh does not condone rape of any sort but she had a sheet of information which she worte from,including jistory and stuff,and one of the categories was "law & order"...
I think I many publish that.
Yes.Rape is one of the most offensive and disgusting methods of degrading someone.It is not tolerable and we should not tolerate it.
-Jane
Uploading Lornaigh's Stories Industries. -
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(#) monstrice901 2012-01-17 07:39:30 AM
Amazing chapter - fuck the whole story is amazing, I'm reading it now for what, the third time over? Annnnyyywaaaay, I just noticed as I was reading it that it said "the other three million people on the planet". I'm guessing it was a typo of billion, 'cos obviously there were more than three million or the world would have been wiped out 20 times over by World War 2!
Sorry - I know I sound like a bitch pointing it out, but things like that just bug me, and I figured if I said something you could correct it, or tell me to fuck off, or whatever!
As I already said, great story anyway!
SxAuthor's response
Haha, I guess that is a typo. No worries though, you don't sound like a bitch XD and thanks for pointing that out, mate.
Cheers!
JNI
ULSI -
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(#) OhmyGee 2012-08-16 05:08:36 PM
The part with 'Gerard working with William Shakespeare'....was motherfuckin' hilarious!!.... Great job!