Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.
Scream your heart out!
4 ReviewsGerard's confused, and more questions are asked.
Reviews
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I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.
(#) japulapu 2011-08-09 07:00:23 AM
You certainly are an expert at building the suspense. The short sentences are well built and powerful. Gerard's frustration is actually felt by the reader, thus making you want to read the next chapter. The choice sentences that trail off are well done, just adding to the mystery of it all. Some of the questions Gerard asks himself get a little repatitive, probably to emphasize the importance? That's all I have to say on this chapter. Well done.Author's response
Well thank you very much. :) -
I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.
(#) AmberMayJensen 2011-08-11 02:05:26 AM
I am very intrigued by this story. It's well written, flawless and powerful. It's one of my favorites, and all the questions have me sitting on the edge of my seat.Author's response
Oh wow, well thank you! I'm glad you think so. I'll be updating soon. xo -
I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-08-13 07:13:06 AM
this is so confusing. i bet i have more questions than Gerard. i love how you're building the suspense :) this is awesome.Author's response
Hahaha, probably XD
Well thank you! :) xo -
I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.
(#) VanJA212 2011-08-15 11:27:07 AM
Waaaaaah! I'm soooo curious! And i'm trying really hard to find out what he did but my mind just won't tell me. Dammit! xD
Anyway, this was an awesome chapter, i know i say that at every chapter but it's true X)
Author's response
Hahaha, it's not as bad as you might think. Everyone just hates him for it because he ruined lives. Think.. think smaller.