He kicked her in the ribs as she was trying to get up, making her cry in pain. She felt her whole body retract but knew she had to stand up.
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2011-08-22 12:35:28 AMThis is absolutely amazing! I'm excited to read more, can't wait until you post again =)
Your writing is really excellent and the story is full of suspense. I'm really curious as to what happens in the next chapter.