He kicked her in the ribs as she was trying to get up, making her cry in pain. She felt her whole body retract but knew she had to stand up.
Go team fob, go team! This is so exciting. Poor Pete.
This is really good! :) well done.
This is absolutely amazing! I'm excited to read more, can't wait until you post again =)
Your writing is really excellent and the story is full of suspense. I'm really curious as to what happens in the next chapter.
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