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• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) Bitch-Bot 2011-08-12

  fraks character is really developing and starting to become someone whou would marry the leader of a gang in the mafia and gee, oh gee, i fucking cried! didnt help that i thought my mum was gonna die this time last year because i thought she had cancer (didnt, it was just a lump) and i kinda think `what if` sometimes and this kind of thing always does that but its a fucking sad chapter
  
  update soon

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) AdnarimSmada 2011-08-12

  Jeez, I didn't cry but it definitely hurt reading that. I was very close to it though, I hurt for a fictional plot line. Lornaigh is sorely mistaken everytime she says she can't write moving stuff. That moved me to the core. Not just me, my grandmother, who has been following this and is just as big a fan as a I am, too. Lornaigh, you made an old woman cry, no matter how much she denies it. Simply haunting. Just beautiful.
  
  -Adnarim Smada

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) PineappleExpress 2011-08-12

  That was really upsetting. I didn't cry, but it still made me very sad...
  
  To make it worse I was listening to Cancer as I was reading this...
  
  Update soon..
  
  -Sydney

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) afabulouskilljoy 2011-08-12

  This was great, we are seeing both Frank and Gerard develop and I so much for both of them. G'aww.
  xo

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) imjustagirlnotahero 2011-08-12

  This one was amazing. To hear Gerard's past made me close to tears.
  I'm glad Frank's getting what he deserves.

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) AtomicAftermath 2011-08-12

  I fucking CRIED MAN. That was so damn heartbreakng, both of their little stories and stuff...oh man, shit, im getting tears on my keys.
  Loved it as usual.

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) paradoxicalcynic 2011-08-12

  Dude, this wasn't shit at all!
  It wouldnt make sense to have Gerard crying his eyes out and sobbing all over the place due to the characterisation you've created - so you did a superbly fantastic job. It fitted into the context awesomely :D

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) andreajp 2011-08-13

  Yea if this was awful, absolute shit to read how come I'm tearing up....You writers...

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