Donna and Mikey visit once more. Annelise comes up with a new nickname for Gerard, and Gerard comes up with one for Annelise.
(#) midnight_star22 2011-08-17 03:47:53 PMAwesome (: have I mentioned how much much I love this? Oh well.
I LOVE IT!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's responseHaha, maybe a few times. But it's always nice to hear! Well thank you anyway. :) xox
- For some reason I liked this chapter very much. And yes, Frank has an entire "Happy" feel to him. It's actually quite funny to just look at Gerard's thoughts from a third person view. It's really frustrating(that's a good thing, incase you are wondering). You're drawing out the suspense nice and long. At the same time it doesn't look like you've run out of inspiration or ideas. The most striking thing about your writing is how flawlessly it flows. It's very smooth. The scenes aren't awkward or abrupt. This is the most detailed review I've done for you so far because I was really impressed with this chapter. I guess I just adore dark humour. Good job.
Author's responseWell, I'm very flattered right now! I'm very glad you like this chapter, and that you feel Frank has a 'Happy' vibe about him. I like that you feel I'm drawing the suspense out nice and long, and that you feel I haven't run out of ideas or inspiration. It's quite funny, because I've never been stuck for ideas, but I don't think of them, I just write as I go. I don't plan them. I'm very happy you think my writing flows as well, that's a huge compliment for me. Also, I'm happy the scenes aren't awkward or abrupt. :)
Well, detailed is good. This made me smile a lot. Thank you! :)
Ps. I like dark humor too, don't worry. XD
- This story is amazing.
Is it bad that I find Annelise funny?
I think I might have a thing for fictional blood-thirsty people. Meh :)
Author's responseWell thank you very much. :)
And no, I'm glad you like her. But that's no problem, everyone is 'fascinated' by something. For example, space and lava really fascinate me. XD
As does Schizophrenia..
- Aww they are so cute :') However... i still don't think they can ever forgive him for what he's done. They might not hate him but i don't think they trust him.
Oh and i'm sorry that i can't read this story regularly but i'm so busy these days D:
Author's responseAha! You have amazing observation skills. Ah, don't worry! I'm just happy you review, it means a lot to me. :)