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• All's fair in Love and War.

  (#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2011-08-25

  its a great story (: yeah with the cutting thing, i think its quite 'oh im sad so im gunna cut' and well that kinda is what it is, but well in my experience, i feel kinda depressed for a while before and then after i cut everything feels better for a while. god i really hope my friend isnt reading this :S
  so maybe you could fore shadow it with a climax and make the character seem a bit more relaxed afterwards.
  hope this helps xoxo lina

  Author's response

  Thanks for heping me out:)
  I'll try to make it more of a climax next time... if there is a next time.... there probs will be.... SPOILERS! ;) x

• All's fair in Love and War.

  (#) YouCanRunAwayWithMe 2011-08-26

  ha lol glad to be of assistance :3
  keep running xoxo lina

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