How fragile is life? How good is it to keep a secret from someone, even when you don't want to break their heart. Who will be the hero- even with his last breath? (A/A, J/T)
(#) Sushi 2006-06-06 06:24:53 PM
Aww! That was tragic and romantic. Like Romio and Juliet, only just one of them died. I Loved it!
(#) lila 2006-06-06 08:21:48 PM
holy crap are you crazy i am quiet mad now but if you write one about jay and theresa i will forgive you
(#) ghjfvn 2006-06-07 01:37:10 PM
omg that was so sad even when i read it over 100 times it always makes me a ball of tears
(#) Moonee 2006-06-07 02:16:23 PM
sniff I'm so flattered. I'm gonna do a fan-art for this story. Probably Archie getting run-through with a spear sobb
(#) Pheonee 2006-06-08 03:40:53 AM
NO!!!!! NO!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
That is the saddest story I have ever read, exept for one book and that was, well different. You have got serious talent, you ever been told? How's someone supposed to give constructive critism fro something like that? It was so intense! I mean I never say anything unsuitable for a child 8 and under, but I feel inclined to say a really really REALLY rude word right now. That's how good it is.
(#) hng 2006-06-08 12:40:44 PM
that is so sad i thought id be able not to cry this time but it forced tears out anyway.this story is so sad but i just keep reading it over and over and once i read the first sentance i want to leave but its like i cant this is so beautifuly awsome and it really puts you in atlantas shoes .
(#) gib 2006-06-09 10:59:29 AM
every time i read this i cry so hard and i tried not to once but it didnt work and i just read the little caption and i started to cry.silly me.
(#) hg 2006-06-09 01:23:12 PM
hey do people have something aganst Archie?Cause in everyones story he dies.
(#) matty 2006-06-10 03:43:39 PM
thats why i hate crying i messed up my eye liner
I read it again and still I cried