(#) FrankieXIero 2011-09-04I beg you, please do not kill Wiliam! I do not know why but I have always really liked William and I never want him to die in anything.
I mean, I know it's your story and you can do whatever you want really. And seeing the way things are going in this story you are probably going to be killing a lot of people. I would just like it very much if you didn't kill William :) That is all I ask.
This story is great by the way. I am really enjoying reading it and can't wait for the next chapter already :)
(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-09-05When i started reading this chapter i assumed the group was small consisting only of the people in Patrick's car, and i thought 'Oh okay then' then you introduced a few more and i was just like 'Oh crap, half these people are going to be dead by the end of the next chapter'.
I honestly loved it though, especially Ryan's demeanor. Update soon, i can't wait for the torture to reintroduce itself.
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