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Light(e)ning
11 ReviewsA true testament to ennui (along with a good deal of fatigue), it's crappy, banal and rather dumb, if you ask me. All in all, it's just a random ArchiexAtlanta fic.
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Light(e)ning
(#) Frimmy 2006-06-07 11:55:17 AM
well, much as i'd love to flame you for the intro paragraph you gave, i can't, because there's nothing much to flame really. except it's hard to tell whose speaking at times. and the transition between jokingly/playful to romantic/serious is a little fast.
asides from that, it was pretty good. keep writing! -
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(#) Arisey 2006-06-07 04:26:44 PM
It was really good! I agree a bit with Frimy, though, it was kind of hard to see who was talking. -
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(#) StinkFace 2006-06-08 05:25:01 AM
Awww, so cute. I liked it. Very good. Keep up the work. -
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(#) heather 2006-06-09 10:55:24 AM
hey that was very good but i sorta got a question . ok so i have a story i want to put on this site and i wan to know how? i know that this os off topic but can you please tell me? -
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(#) Life-is-Pain 2006-06-09 02:05:16 PM
Thank you for the reviews, and I shall try to write more, though at the moment exams are driving me mad. An extra bit of thanks to Frimmy, I see those faults now, and will try to fix it in any other writing I do. As for heather, if you register, you can post your story on this site. -
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(#) crazy_reviewer 2006-07-05 06:58:44 AM
Very nice! my crickets and I love Lightning, so this story was very much appreciated!
crickets take the keyboard
its true we do love lightning!