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Big plans are coming undone.

by DisenchantedEnding 5 Reviews

The plan is set into action!

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2011/09/06 - Updated: 2011/09/06 - 913 words

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  • I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

    (#) LoveLustAndPixieDust 2011-09-06 12:21:01 PM

    Ooooooooohhhh cliff hanger!

    So I'm like stalking all your work right now and this is my favourite so far!

    its super duper awesome!

    update soooooooon xxx Hat

    Author's response

    Haha, glad you like it. I'm also glad you're stalking my work; I love new readers... And reviews! So thank you! I'll try update sometime this week. Xo
  • I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

    (#) YourFamousLastWords 2011-09-06 01:02:43 PM

    WOO Cliff hanger :D I liked the revealing of Frank's true self.

    Well worth the wait!

    Author's response

    Glad you liked it! Haha, you're happy about cliffhangers? still, I'm glad it was worth the wait. Xo
  • I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

    (#) Niamh04 2011-09-06 02:56:02 PM

    Noooooooo!
    How could you do this to me!!
    I demand that you update immediately. It goes against animal rights to show have awesomeness then only show a tiny bit.
    However- I must point out that I love Frank biting back at Gerard and the fact that Gerard was unhappy about taking nuts. I'm allergic to milk and had to drink a cup of tea (with milk in) to make my forgetful grandparents happy. I was not happy in the slightest.

    Author's response

    I'm super glad you like it! Haha, I'll update ASAP, that's for sure. I'm starting school again tomorrow, so..

    I'm glad that seemed real to you. I tried to feel what someone allergic to nuts would feel if put in that situation. xo
  • I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

    (#) japulapu 2011-09-07 12:05:18 AM

    Brilliant. That ending had just the impact you would have wanted to. It was a brilliant chapter. With a subtle hint of humour and a perfectly built climax. Beautiful. Who knew nuts could be so fatal? I think that was really great, for me it made up completely for the last chapter. Be proud.

    Author's response

    Well that's a huge compliment, thank you very much. I'm very glad you like it. But yes, I looked up symptoms and reactions and well, it's not pleasant. However, there's actually going to be three more chapters..

    Did I say his cause of death? ;)
  • I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

    (#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-09-07 10:36:05 AM

    Woah, awesome ending. I'm reading this on my phone at school (being the rebel i am) and there's a teacher like right behind me but i just had to finish this. Amazing description of the nut allergy thing, i'm not allergic so i wouldn't know but great still. Feel proud and whatnot of this chapter :D

    Author's response

    Thank you! Haha, I'm glad you're being rebellious JUST to read my story. XD

    There's about three more chapters, I think.

    I will, thank you! :D

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