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Spheres and Ellipses

Deciphering the Clue and The 'Hidden Task"

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Humor,Romance - Characters: Harry,Hermione - Warnings: [!!] [V] [?] - Published: 2011/09/08 - Updated: 2011/09/08 - 2636 words

Reviews

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) tricorvus 2011-09-08 01:42:53 AM

  Lovely. Just the ticket. This is exactly the kind of thing I was wishing to see, following his 'exhibition' with the dragon. I can't wait to see what you do with the 2nd task, once he finds out what it is... :D

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) Vanir 2011-09-08 02:27:00 AM

  Perfect. Harry has a very good point, and it's packed with explosives. If there's something in front of you that wants to kill you, you aim, fire and move on. Now, i understand that he's unconcerned with the sheeple's opinions, but that greenhouse thing sounds like he's going out of his way to piss more people off. Either that or we need a better explanation. The ball will be fun, and the upcoming Weasley blowout when Ron finally gets that he's actually out will most likely be hilarious. Oh, and while i think the merfolk might be fairly safe, i fear for anyone who thinks it's a great idea to chain Hermione to the bottom of the lake. Hmm. Military grade aqualung and a CGP-10 scubascooter? Anyway, keep it coming. I'll be right here waiting.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) DrT 2011-09-08 03:17:30 AM

  The underlying interplay between Harry & Hermione was v. sweet; the rest of the chapter was fun!

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) longreachjones 2011-09-08 03:18:24 AM

  Very nice idea with the 'bury the egg' thing, I don't think I've ever seen that variation/idea come up before. Also very good reverse pitch for the yule ball to Hermione.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) Wolfric 2011-09-08 12:07:35 PM

  Good chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) oldsarge 2011-09-08 06:38:30 PM

  Nice filler chapter. Not much action but lots of subtle humor. Although you are going to have to work hard to top "flaming topless vella". I giggled about that for a while. I too can't wait to see what you do with the second task. Thanks for the story so far.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) mrpietan 2011-09-09 02:02:17 PM

  You have definately got my attention ... well done.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) Chris7100 2011-09-16 12:27:26 AM

  Loved the Clockwork Orange and Batman banter in this chapter. Harry's little explanation of the absurdities of the ministry was also a tasty little amuse bouche.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) pott4grager 2012-08-08 07:41:35 AM

  A really excellent story, I have enjoyed reading it up to now very much. I am glad that it is finished, I dislike reading the first few chapters and having to wait for the following ones as I forget what has gone on before and have to 'backread' a fair bit to catch up. Will review again at the end.
  Dave.

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