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Triumvirate

There were once two boys and girls, a brat, a spoiled princess, and a control freak. This is their tragedy. 'They were comrades, never friends, never lovers, but they would gladly die for each other.'

Category: Naruto - Rating: G - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Jiraiya, Orochimaru, Tsunade - Published: 2006/06/09 - Updated: 2006/06/09 - 1683 words - Complete

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• Triumvirate

  (#) celerystalksatnoon 2006-06-29 07:38:04 PM

  1. It was lovely, nicely done. However,
  2. I think that the bit at the end, with the names, cheapens it just a little. You've established the (the what? the flow? the characters? the story?) Anyway, you've established everything well enough in the beginning that when you name them again at the end it seems a bit redundant.

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