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He pleas though he tries, but he's only denied... *Rewritten*

by DisenchantedEnding 4 Reviews

And it all unfolds.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [V] [R] - Published: 2011/09/29 - Updated: 2011/10/09 - 3474 words

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  • I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

    (#) Heartbreak_Beauty 2011-09-29 02:37:47 PM

    I'm highly confused. O.O

    Author's response

    Ah man. About what?
  • I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

    (#) japulapu 2011-10-01 09:03:56 AM

    Ok. First, I love the title. Remembering Sunday. I was singing the rest like ' now he's dying to get inside'. Second, I think I got it. I'm pretty sure infact. I don't know why you thought it was confusing. Second of all, that ending had such a great impact. It was perfect. All the build up, all the tension, just for the same fate to befall him again. At least that's what I got. It was beautifully described. The part where Mikey died really got to me. Beautiful. Heartless and cold. It was great. I love how you mercilessly kill off your characters. Bob, ah, Bob. Who could imagine that little angel being so demonic? I think, throughout the story, his character is very believable. Gerard's disbelief and confusion. Well I don't blame him and Frank, they were completely wasted, but if you look at it from Bob's point of view, I would want to take revenge. But this is a touch far. But still, an amazing story. I think I've said a lot about your description, but this was amazing. It was beyond real. The reader can literally see everything. Brilliantly written. I have now run out of adjectives. You did an outstanding job. Congratulations.

    Author's response

    Okay, all I can say is wow. Lmao. I have never, in my life, been so flattered. Thank you so much. I should explain that bob and Marty are not dead, but they are injured. Incredibly. I shall explain it all in the epilogue. Well, thank you so so much. I hope you enjoy the last chapter.

    You're a fantastic reader. So, thanks. :)
  • I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

    (#) MCRnA7xlover 2011-10-08 09:56:31 AM

    amazing just amazing this has to be my favorite story ever

    Author's response

    Oh wow! I'm very glad you liked it! :)
  • I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

    (#) MCRkilljoy 2011-10-09 06:16:24 AM

    i was nt eepeting this when i frist started to read it

    but i very much enjoied it cause im sick in the head like that

    Author's response

    I'm so thrilled you like it! Thank you very much.

    And being sick in the head is fine; I am. XD

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