I really do like Avenged Sevenfold.
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I really really really love this story. I loved all the cinema stuff and the reference to 'spin the bottle' where Gee and Fronkeh kissed ;D
Which brings me on to the question, in case I missed you telling people, is this going to be a Frerard or not? It's cool as it is... but would be even cooler as a Frerard xD But your choice man :D Love it :D
Author's responseYes! Feedback! Thank youuuuu!!!!!!!
I'm really really really happy that you love the story. It makes me warm inside. :D As for Frerardness? I haven't really been telling people 100% yes or no, partly because I'm afraid people will ditch if I give them a straight answer, partly cos I'm still not sure yet. But if I decide NOT to, I am working on another story which is definitely gonna be a Frerard. So look forward to it!
Thanks for reviewing! X
- Do I suck, since I know all the words to that song and only caught one reference (the name)? Probably. Dgaf.
Poor Gerard, he's so awkward. This read like a middle school date, and he's sixteen!
Still fabulous and still funny. Samantha's character is really "meh" for me still, though. She's rather one-dimensional. What does Gerard see in her besides a Grecian goddess?
Author's responseMaybe a tiny weeny bit. Otherwise I did a good job disguising them. :P
Yeah, Samantha is supposed to be a little on the Mary Sue-ish side. I'm trying to get people to hate her as much as I do myself.
Thanks for reviewing!
- Oh you do make me laugh sometimes. I'm pretty sure I spotted all the references, I thought you fit them very well into the story, so congrats for that :)
I missed heather in this chapter :( it's funny when she's there.
You will be happy to know that I have rated this chapter, as I found it quite amusing, especially young Nile, he's funny
I need to tell you this true story about cannibals in Somerset in prehistoric times. It was on digging for Britain, and it was kinda gross
Author's responseYes! Finally, a proper review from you! Thank you for finding it "quite amusing" because contrary to popular belief I do actually care what you think sometimes. And thank you for finding it in your heart to give me a rating, I hope it didn't hurt too much.
Love ya. :P
(#) PartyPooperX 2011-10-03 11:58:08 PMA little piece of heaven. Boom.
Lol that was classic "i have to empty my bladder" :P actually QUOTING from it with you proves i'm hooked :P
awesome chapter by the way. and yes, i would. lol young nile rocks. but we need a little more drama! like...i dunno...make samantha DIE or somethin?
i'll go die now.
(#) CosmicZombie 2011-11-08 09:57:50 AMokay, how does this story actually get more and more awesome with every fucking sentence?! I'm trying really, really hard not to totally overuse capitals and go into a total fangirl freakout, but JEEEEEZ!! just.so.freaking.awesome.
andside-splittingly hilarious. I was reading this chapter in bed and I kept making these funny little squeaky sounds cause I was trying not to laugh and wake everyone up as it was like, 3AM :L
um, yeah. i'm gunna shut up and stop gushing now. it must get seriously irritating.
Author's responseProbably because I have awesome reviewers to keep me writing! And when does it ever get irritating to hear people say they like reading what I write? Thanks for reviewing! :D