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The Last Good-bye

What happens when Julius and Deililah are trapped, and only one of them can come out alive...what choice will be made? (poetry, one shot)

Category: Delilah and Julius - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2006/06/09 - Updated: 2006/06/10 - 255 words - Complete

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• The Last Good-bye

  (#) brianna 2006-06-09 11:22:43 PM

  like romeo and juleit

  Author's response

  LOL...hey...it sorta is, isn't it? Huh. Never realized that, LOL
  
  
  
  Thanks for reviewing!
  Darkness' Kid

• The Last Good-bye

  (#) cassandra 2006-06-10 01:06:11 PM

  How sad.

  Author's response

  hands cassandra some tissues
  
  Don't cry! hands Brianna some tissues
  
  Thanks for reviewing!
  Darkness' Kid

• The Last Good-bye

  (#) sam 2006-06-10 02:27:22 PM

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  Author's response

  WOAH! you must have really hate my story, huh? (smriks) meh. I'm used to critism. LOL.

• The Last Good-bye

  (#) toby 2006-06-13 08:11:02 AM

  my eyes closed but did not open i tried not to reviel the tears that leaked down my cheak but it was hopless i began a fit of tears

  Author's response

  Wow that was very nice. You must like poetry, am I correct? Poetry rocks!
  
  
  Thanks for reviewing!
  Darkness' Kid

• The Last Good-bye

  (#) Lora 2006-06-21 07:28:09 AM

  what! Why would he kill himself if she dieD so he could live! WHO DEOS THAT! That defeted the whole point of her killing herslef!!..guys r soo difucult! but ut was nicly written still, i liked it and enjoyed reading it! keep it up!

  Author's response

  Wow at first I thought you were critiziing me...LOL...thanks for not doing that, LOL. Woah, what you said...that makes so much sence. Isn't it funny how reviewers notice this but that writer doesn't? HA! My God, where has my brain gone? Thank you so much!
  
  Thanks for reviewing!
  Darkness' Kid

• The Last Good-bye

  (#) princessofoyownworld 2006-06-29 04:01:07 PM

  Wow. Great now my mascara is running. Very well writen ,very Romeo and Julliette.

  Author's response

  hands princessofoyownworld tissues woah, really? Your mascara is actually running? Aww thanks so much. I just love stories and poetry! Thanks for reviewing!
  
  xxDarkness' Kidxx

• The Last Good-bye

  (#) jessica 2006-07-08 03:09:30 PM

  that was a excellent storie but dont think you are the greatest i write stories about delilah and julius too and i am a # 1 fan i watch it everyday old or not and these are sucky unlike mine you gave me ideas and now i made new ones good luck on you next one though and keep dreaming julius is all mine im a girl too i want my name too actually be delilah so email me @snow_princess_4eva@hotmail.com and i am 10 by the way younger than you too make stories you know

  Author's response

  Ok, I e-mailed you to talk about this. Let's not go there again.
  
  xxDarkness' Kidxx

• The Last Good-bye

  (#) jessica 2006-07-08 03:13:54 PM

  my stories are very touching to people i dream about it then when i wake up i write the delilah and julius stories that i have dreamed about got it darkness kid i am very smart evrybody says!!!

  Author's response

  Again, I e-mailed you about this response. You brag lots, don't ya?..sorry had to say that
  
  xxDarkness' Kidxx

• The Last Good-bye

  (#) greektitan 2007-01-09 05:10:40 PM

  aww,that was so cute,Julius killed him self because he wanted to be with Delilah!Awww best D.J.Story..poem...i have read yet!^_^ keep it up!=)

• The Last Good-bye

  (#) darkangel666 2007-04-14 10:49:19 AM

  thats good but you should have made the story longer and not start at the climax it good though :)

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