Determined to take the fight to Voldemort, Harry decides drastic measures are needed. A new player enters the arena in the form of Lord Black. Fighting fire with fire, Harry struggles to thwart the...
(#) c3markh 2006-05-13 06:59:38 AM
Great start; Thanks for writing.
(#) loralee1 2006-05-13 08:33:27 AM
Looks good, more please.
(#) Gibby 2006-05-13 09:39:12 AM
Wow, good story so far. But are you going to have all of his friends help Dumbledore? Anyway hope you update soon.
(#) Lira_Snape 2006-05-18 11:07:10 PM
Intriguing premise. It will be interesting to see where you're going with this.
(#) Myst 2006-05-20 02:43:24 PM
I enjoyed the story, it wasnt that bad at all.
Although, I suggest submitting it to ff.net for more fedeback.
(#) Derungo 2006-05-21 06:59:56 AM
I liked your story alot, and the prolouge was an interesting opener. I hope you continue, hopefully without some of the terrible cliches that have over-ridden fanfiction. and if you want more feedback on your story i would recommend posting on fanfiction.net
(#) JVTazz 2006-06-05 02:25:55 AM
I liked the prologue, interested in seeing what else you're going to be doing