Determined to take the fight to Voldemort, Harry decides drastic measures are needed. A new player enters the arena in the form of Lord Black. Fighting fire with fire, Harry struggles to thwart the...
Great start; Thanks for writing.
(#) Gibby 2006-05-13
Wow, good story so far. But are you going to have all of his friends help Dumbledore? Anyway hope you update soon.
Intriguing premise. It will be interesting to see where you're going with this.
(#) Myst 2006-05-20
I enjoyed the story, it wasnt that bad at all.
Although, I suggest submitting it to ff.net for more fedeback.
I liked your story alot, and the prolouge was an interesting opener. I hope you continue, hopefully without some of the terrible cliches that have over-ridden fanfiction. and if you want more feedback on your story i would recommend posting on fanfiction.net
I liked the prologue, interested in seeing what else you're going to be doing
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