Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.


by DisenchantedEnding 2 Reviews

It's past final realization. It's past hating himself. It's past Donna not talking to him. Gerard has lost his mind.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2011/10/09 - Updated: 2011/10/09 - 709 words


  • I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

    (#) japulapu 2011-10-09 06:49:00 AM

    Okie. I think that wrapped up the story quite well. I finally got rating points so yippee for you. I think the ending had a nice impact. There isn't much to say as it was flawless and all that has to be said has already been spoken about. Good job.

    Author's response

    Oh cool, yay! :)
    I just edited the tense errors and such, so it's all good now. Thank you very much:)
  • I'll never let you leave, never let you breathe.

    (#) DisenchantedDestroya 2011-10-09 01:17:48 PM

    Wow :D I loved this story soo much , It's brilliant, Really well written and really well thought out , Amazing - Job well done ^.^ Seriously your like one of my favourite writters on here
    -DD XO

    Author's response

    wow. cries into cupcake pjs

    You're so nice! Thank you so much!

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