(#) xXxVIKKYxXx 2006-07-10I loooovvvveeee this storie.. Your the first to make me cry over a story.. Congrats lol.. I hope you update soon!
Author's responsethanks i'm glad you enjoy it. sorry for making you cry. not sure when the next update will be but i'll try to make it as soon as possible
(#) Lillith_Thursday 2006-10-11No. It didn't suck. I just have one complaint though. Well not complaint but a suggestion. When I read this chapter I saw that it went from Benji's POV to a third person POV. I don't want to sound mean but I'd suggest that it stay in the first person sense. If it goes into a flash back, just keep it in a first person sense. Okay. I sounded like abitch there. I'm just trying to help. Hope I wasn't beening mean because I didn't want it to sound that way but it was a good chapter.
Author's responseYou didn't sound like a bitch at all. Thanks for pointing it out it's much appreciated.
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