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Chapter 5

don't want to give anything away on this chapter

Category: Good Charlotte - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Crossover - Characters:  - Published: 2006/06/13 - Updated: 2006/06/13 - 6536 words

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  (#) punkprincess GC 2006-06-13 07:35:30 PM

  hey your doing an awesome job but you have to stop making me cry its not fair lol. i hope you update soon

  Author's response

  thanks. i'm sorry for making you cry

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  (#) shalow_angel 2006-06-14 01:41:01 AM

  lol..i agree with punkprincess GC
  u know how to make people cry..
  aleast benji is back...
  ur really doing a awesomely job =]
  update when u can
  ..really enjoying reading this story

  Author's response

  :D thank you, glad you enjoy it

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  (#) Sezra 2006-07-10 02:21:41 AM

  Aw benji is so cute! lol thanx for thanking me for my review, even if it was random lol

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  (#) xXxVIKKYxXx 2006-07-10 08:21:47 AM

  I loooovvvveeee this storie.. Your the first to make me cry over a story.. Congrats lol.. I hope you update soon!

  Author's response

  thanks i'm glad you enjoy it. sorry for making you cry. not sure when the next update will be but i'll try to make it as soon as possible

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  (#) xXxVIKKYxXx 2006-07-10 08:22:04 AM

  I loooovvvveeee this storie.. Your the first to make me cry over a story.. Congrats lol.. I hope you update soon!

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  (#) shalow_angel 2006-07-19 02:20:26 AM

  are you writting anymore on this story?

  Author's response

  yes i'm planning on writing another chapter..not sure when it will be up though.

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  (#) Rove 2006-08-22 05:36:34 AM

  i love this story please update asap

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  (#) sam 2006-09-02 01:44:18 PM

  i like the last chapter when are you going to finish the story

  Author's response

  :( just the last chapter??
  
  i should be updating soon...hopefully, i'm trying to finish the second to my other story A love lost which i'm having trouble with.

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  (#) Lillith_Thursday 2006-10-11 08:57:35 PM

  No. It didn't suck. I just have one complaint though. Well not complaint but a suggestion. When I read this chapter I saw that it went from Benji's POV to a third person POV. I don't want to sound mean but I'd suggest that it stay in the first person sense. If it goes into a flash back, just keep it in a first person sense. Okay. I sounded like abitch there. I'm just trying to help. Hope I wasn't beening mean because I didn't want it to sound that way but it was a good chapter.

  Author's response

  You didn't sound like a bitch at all. Thanks for pointing it out it's much appreciated.

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  (#) turtle 2006-11-06 10:25:54 PM

  this is an awsome story please continue it

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