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Pure Morning

Our thoughts compressed, which makes us blessed, and makes for stormy weather.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Warnings: [V] [X] [R] - Published: 2011/10/26 - Updated: 2011/10/26 - 4016 words - Complete

Reviews

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) MyChemFreak 2011-10-26 03:35:02 PM

  Holy shit, they raped innocent little Lucianna...
  Sick bastards:| fan fiction or not, it's terrible:( but I love Lornaigh's writing; it's really brilliant:3

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) AdnarimSmada 2011-10-26 04:10:06 PM

  Christ, that was probably one of the most disgusting things I've ever read.
  
  Really? She is a child. No one deserves to be raped but fuck, it's so much worse to do that to a child.
  
  That sick bastard got what he deserved, not enough though.
  
  -Adnarim Smada

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) Bitch-Bot 2011-10-27 11:15:54 AM

  fuck
  
  lucianna was raped? ive never liked warner, even irl i dont like maralyn manson. but then this made me cry and then the end is like a fuse towards an explosion! i knew gee would snap at some point
  

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) Emorockergoth 2011-10-28 02:20:15 AM

  I cant believe that he raped poor little luci what a sick fuck.
  
  God that torture sounded like the worst thing that could happen to someone but thats probs cause I just hate rats the things scare the crap out of me :(
  
  Poor Luci I mean this has absolutley destroyed her frankie and Gerard.
  
  Cant wait for the next bit XD

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) MCRkilljoy 2011-10-30 04:22:48 AM

  i read this during school a few days ago but i couldmnt comment,
  THEY RAPED A CHILD, A YOUNG GIRL THATS JUST SICK, AND THEN THEY SAY THEY ENJOIED IT,
  and gerard quit, he quit, YOU MADE HIM QUIT. WHY??!
  awell ur story, u do what u want but pleae update soon, as in really really really really soon
  

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) MCR_punk 2011-10-31 08:31:25 PM

  WOW. JUST WOW. That is sick, just sick. The thing Warner did, the gore and stuff was fine, but wow. I don't even know what to say. Awesome writing, just amazing.

• First of the Gang to Die

  (#) striketoincinerate 2011-11-01 11:42:09 AM

  this story is absolutely amazing, i don't tend to cry at these kind of things but dammit this has managed to! Poor Luci, and I can't wait for the next update! xo

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